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An exercise in paragraph unity
Lab 6
In this lab, you will see a paragraph that is not arranged in logical order. The paragraph needs editing for both Paragraph Unity and Sentence Cohesion. Your goal is to rearrange sentences and to add the elements that will make this paragraph coherent. You need only to rearrange the sentences in the original paragraph, adding the occasional transition word. You do not need to rewrite whole sentences or the whole paragraph.
When you are ready, continue with Lab 6. Refer to the page on Coherence in Writing if you need to review.
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